Saturday, April 16, 2016

Research



Animal Cruelty
Intro- Animal cruelty is when someone hurts an animal or does not care for an animal responsibility, like not giving a dog or cat food and water. It is against the law to be cruel to or harm animals, even your own pets. It's also called animal abuse.

Thesis- Animal cruelty is affecting animals and humans while animals are getting hurt physically while we are being hurt physically.

Body paragraph- I am using the information about the criminal underground world of dogs fighting for first paragraph. This paragraph going to cover how they are raised and the drugs they are given for the fight. 
Support- They are raised in complete isolation and spend most of their lives on short heavy chains. They are also given steroids to increase muscle mass for fighting and making them aggressive. I will add more information about other animals that are being abuse on my rough draft. 

2nd paragraph- In this paragraph I will answer to question; who abuses animals, other animals and where is this event taking place in the world and how are they treating the animals. 
Support- The animals that are most common by their statistics are dogs, cats, horses and rooster.“The U.S. Drug Enforcement Agency has prosecuted multiple cases where drug cartels were running narcotics through cockfighting and dog fighting operations. In 2014, federal agents found that international drug dealers had congregated at a Kentucky cockfighting pit and even sent a hit man to target a local cockfight.”


3rd body paragraph-In this paragraph I am going to talk about the affect animal cruelty has over family. In this source I found that animal abuse affects both animal and humans. 
Support- Professor Frank Ascione of the University Of Denver Graduate School Of Social Work says, “The research is pretty clear that there are connections between animal abuse and domestic violence and child abuse.”(13)

Restate thesis/ Conclusion - Animal cruelty is not only affecting animals but also humans because of their behavior towards animal, their children will learn and pick up their parents action which is affecting them and their future. 

Nirakaran B. Malla

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