Saturday, March 12, 2016

Taking a Stand Essay



 Evaluation: Keeping abortion legal in the United States


Substantiation: By keeping abortion legal, it minimizes the problem of illegal and unsafe abortion procedures, and helps minimize the number of children being abused and harmed everyday while living with unhappy families. 


Policy: Citing multiple statistics of how many pregnancies in the US are unplanned and how many turn to abortion every year. By providing those numbers it emphasizes the number of women that would turn to unsafe and illegal abortion procedures if the law changed. 


For logos I used statistics to prove the mass amount of abortions each year making the audience see that many people turn to this solution a high percentage of the time.



For ethos I used the citations of multiple credible websites, bringing in numbers from as current as 2015.


For pathos I suggested the audience to imagine being in a similar spot during the introduction, and see the situation from a different point of view, bringing out the emotion in the audience.


- Yazmin O

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